Lighting the Mermaid — getting there!

I'm still not quite hitting the spot with my attempts at lighting the Mermaid of the North but I'm getting closer so I thought I'd show you what I came up with this evening. These aren't processed at all, just straight out of the camera. You can see that the potential is there, especially if I can get the moon in view again, but the pics are still lacking a certain something. I'll figure it out…